Creating Hell on Earth story!

Hey so I'm doin' this story thing, it's called, as the subject says, Creating Hell on Earth! I'll put the links to the first three parts here, and update as I complete more of the story!

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Enjoy reading! Feedback/constructive criticism is also greatly appreciated! (Also I apologize for the shortness of the parta, I'm working on ittttt)